“Someone who got caught trying to delete their file from the Experiment Nexus. They gave me detention. You?”
Need to ensure the story is engaging, with a good balance of action and character development. Check for consistency in the sci-fi elements and make sure the case number is tied into the plot somehow, maybe as a tracking code or part of the school's system. -ENG- Vertin in detention -RJ01250668-
The room’s hum turned oppressive. Onscreen, the coordinates updated: . Vertin’s scarred fingers flew across his keyboard, not to escape, but to leave a loop in the system—a digital footprint leading back to the Nexus. “Someone who got caught trying to delete their
Vertin smirked. “I corrected it.”